Well, it took me five chapters to realize it, and I'm the one writing the darned thing!
It happens so fast, everyone, characters and readers all, are in the middle of this frantic bit of action, where there really isn't any time to stop and think about what just happened.
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Date: 2008-05-30 08:16 pm (UTC)It happens so fast, everyone, characters and readers all, are in the middle of this frantic bit of action, where there really isn't any time to stop and think about what just happened.