One Pot Of Coffee And A Missed Breakfast Later...

Now we are starting to get somewhere. There is too much exposition front-loaded in the narrative at the moment, but that is the kind of thing I can fix in the second draft. It is the kind of story/world building stuff that I need in order to understand what is happening and why, but would bog the reader down. I'll cut out what isn't needed later and sprinkle the rest into the tale in bits and pieces once I finish this draft.

I'm taking a break. I'm at the part where Holly is seeking Richard's aid and Richard is about to ask her exactly what it is she wants him to do about her situation.

I'm not entirely sure what the answer to that question is.

Fey and Mage: They Fight Crime!

One Pot Of Coffee And A Missed Breakfast Later...

Now we are starting to get somewhere. There is too much exposition front-loaded in the narrative at the moment, but that is the kind of thing I can fix in the second draft. It is the kind of story/world building stuff that I need in order to understand what is happening and why, but would bog the reader down. I'll cut out what isn't needed later and sprinkle the rest into the tale in bits and pieces once I finish this draft.

I'm taking a break. I'm at the part where Holly is seeking Richard's aid and Richard is about to ask her exactly what it is she wants him to do about her situation.

I'm not entirely sure what the answer to that question is.

Fey and Mage: They Fight Crime!