Glad to help! I always imagined him materializing in the concourse, with all the crackling power, like the unicorn in "Unicorn Variations." Since the energy of the story is so tied to the location, I figured it would start there. Of course, you get to write it how you want it, but that's just my suggestion. I'm really excited to read it.
It's kinda weird not to be going there this year, especially after looking at the pics. Is the story set at Christmas?
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Date: 2008-12-08 03:08 pm (UTC)It's kinda weird not to be going there this year, especially after looking at the pics. Is the story set at Christmas?