Entry tags:

dark water,
rewrite

Exhale

Finished the restructuring pass of "Dark Water Blues." Plot holes are repaired. Continuity brought in line. Cut it down to 84K. It needs one final pass to polish it up a bit, then I can start sending it out.

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