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mmerriam ([identity profile] mmerriam.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mmerriam 2010-11-07 03:43 pm (UTC)

I think this is definitely a case of "less is more." Right now the plan is to scatter out the info that must get in as one and two sentence bits when the pertinent characters come on stage. That should keep it down to about 5 to 10 sentences total scattered over the first three chapters.

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