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Jul. 12th, 2004 10:09 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
mmerriamA nice day of working on fiction. I started rebuilding "Move Along Home" into a novel, moving text around and adding some scenes. The first two chapters are finished, as is chapter four. Chapter three will be all new text in which I introduced the story's villian, so I'll need to spend sometime working on it. I took my unfinished story "Here the Hunter", a little urban fantasy murder mystery, and used it in the opening chapter of the story.
I received my critique from the Hubbard contest. The person who wrote the crit did a good job. They made four points, two of which I agreed with completely, one of which I understand, though don't completely agree with, and one of which I discarded as useless. I plan to start a re-write tomorrow.![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
careswen threw some good ideas at me after reading the critique, something she is wonderful at. She has also pulled out the Red Pen Of Doom ™ on my story "Into This Land" and started working it over.
In other news, tomorrow is International Science Fiction Writers Meetup Day happening at Chicago Deli, 4810 Chicago Avenue South, Minneapolis.
See Ya There!
I received my critique from the Hubbard contest. The person who wrote the crit did a good job. They made four points, two of which I agreed with completely, one of which I understand, though don't completely agree with, and one of which I discarded as useless. I plan to start a re-write tomorrow.
careswen threw some good ideas at me after reading the critique, something she is wonderful at. She has also pulled out the Red Pen Of Doom ™ on my story "Into This Land" and started working it over. In other news, tomorrow is International Science Fiction Writers Meetup Day happening at Chicago Deli, 4810 Chicago Avenue South, Minneapolis.
See Ya There!
