The Journal of Michael Merriam

He leaned into the young woman, gently caressing her cheek with the barest feather-light touch of his fingertips. She closed her eyes and opened her mouth slightly, her tongue darting out to moisten lips parted for his kiss.

"Dear Contessa Moretti," Arkady Bloom whispered, placing his other hand on her hip, the soft fabric of her dinner dress pliable under his embrace. Only the finest for the most favored niece of the Italian ambassador. He ran his hand up her side, stopping mere inches from her breast before stoking back down and over her hip, caressing the top of her outer thigh. "I have so been waiting for this moment."

She swept the top hat from Bloom's head with a pale hand, tossing it to the chaise lounge nearby. As it landed with a soft thud, she reached behind her head and pulled the long silver pin from her hair, allowing the dark brown locks to cascade down. "As have I, Mr. Bloom." She struck like an angry viper, stabbing at Bloom's neck with the sharp pin.

Bloom twisted away, moving with the speed and grace of his sídhe ancestors. He slapped the hand that held the pin, sending the sharp silver ornament flying across the room. It stuck in the back cushion of a chair. The fabric around the pin began to smoke.

"Really, Contessa, I had no idea you felt that way about me."

She backed away from him with an elaborate string of what Bloom thought were probably curses and spat at his feet. "As if I would lie down with a half-blood thing."

He smiled at her, picking up his hat and placing it on his head while keeping a close watch on her. He had taken what he really wanted from her. It was time to leave. "While I admit the idea of partaking of your charms held a certain temptation, it seems your temperament, my dear, renders us incompatible as companions."

Bloom stepped around her, keeping her in his line of sight. He backed toward the door, picking up his cane from where it rested against the frame. He tipped his hat to her. "Good-day to you, Contessa."

Bloom reached behind his back and turned the door knob, pulling it open. He planned to slip out while making sure she did not manage to stab a knife into his back. He came up against something hard as he backed through the doorway. Bloom looked over his shoulder at the thing that had stymied his retreat, his eyes widening in surprise.

It stood over six and half feet tall, a huge, blocky individual that was once a man but now…now it was a mindless man-creature, its eyes grey-white orbs, its skin ashen and bloodless. A ticking clockwork pump strapped to its back hummed as it pushed light blue fluid through a tube into the creature's neck. The man-creature was dressed in the leather apron of a butcher, its shirt and trousers underneath the apron and the boots on its feet all showing the telltale dried splatter of the trade. It raised its hands and took a slow, clumsy step into the room, forcing Bloom to retreat from its grasp.

"Oh my," Bloom muttered.

Contessa Fiorella Moretti laughed, harsh and shrill. "You did not think I would allow you to simply walk out alive once I lured you here, did you, Mr. Bloom?"
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The steampunk spy-thriller novella is delivered to the publisher, so there is a big load off my mind. Dark Water Blues, has been rewritten and resubmitted to my editor, so another project down. I've been working on rewrites of Dead Brew and finishing the first draft of my still untitled contemporary coming of age novella (can you tell I've fallen in love with the novella length work?). Plans are still afoot to try my hand a screenwriting.

I've also started finalizing and lining up my programming at various conventions for 2012, and I'm looking at doing a few out-of-state readings and signings later this year. Website updates are in the works.

Over on a message board I frequent, we've been talking about Plot vs. Story vs. Characterization, though it is not the epic battle royale it sounds from that description. No one is being bashed over the head with adverbs and tossed out with a form rejection stapled to their foreheads or anything like that.

I've found it interesting watching the folks who only write short fiction and the folks who are writing novels discuss their different perspectives concerning plot. The general consensus is that in short fiction a single plot is preferable, while longer works such as novels, novellas, feature scripts, and long plays, should (and frankly, these days are expected to) have subplots. Of course I could point out examples of short stories with two or even three plots running, and I can point to successful novels that only have the main plot and nothing less the general consensus stated about does seem to be the norm.

In genre fiction (SF/F/H/M/W/R/Thr and others) plot tends to be the emphasis, with characters and setting next in importance, while in what critics call contemporary, literary, or mainstream fiction, character and story tends to rule over plot. This is also a generalization, and of course some "genre" writers focus more on characterization or world-building, while I've seen some lovely plots in post-modern contemporary novels.

From a personal perspective as a writer, I like to write deep characterization first, plot and sub-plot second (grown from the character's desires and conflicts), and deal with world-building very little, hence I tend to write contemporary and urban fantasy with a smattering of magical realism and steampunk/supernatural westerns/supernatural Victoriana where I can use a "real world" setting and short hand the world-building.

I think that in short fiction everything, from paragraph to punctuation, has to advance the story in some way, either moving the plot or developing the characters, hopefully while deepening the sense of scene and place. I think you have more room to digress and get away with long descriptions in novels, though it should be used sparingly.

As always, your mileage may vary.